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Wordy to concise: revision round.

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Love Doctor Revision RoundVersión en línea

Wordy to concise: revision round.

por Jen Gwyneth Suguitan
1

Which sentence best expresses, "I like you because you are a person who is very nice and good"? Hint: This is too "wordy." Say it more directly!

2

Choose the cleaner sentence: 'We should go to the park together at the park today.' Hint: You said "park" twice! It sounds repetitive.

3

Best option for 'I am mad because you didn't call me'? Hint: In a formal letter, "mad" sounds a bit childish. Use a more "grown-up" word.

4

Which sentence is best for tone change: 'You are the bestest friend in the whole world ever'? Hint: "Bestest" isn't a real word. Let's fix the grammar.

5

Formal way to ask about relationship status? Hint: not demanding

6

Precise wording for accountability: 'I'm sorry for the stuff I did'? Hint: "Stuff" is too vague. What did you actually do?

7

Polite request: 'Give me a second chance please' should be? Hint: This is okay, but it lacks "heart." Make it more formal and persuasive.

8

Revised sentence with semicolon: 'Our love is like a flower that grows in the dirt but it is pretty but sometimes it wilts'? Hint: Too many "buts"! The sentence is "running away" from you.

9

Formal inquiry about no longer talking: 'I am writing this to ask you why you don't talk to me anymore'? Hint: This is a Letter of Inquiry! Make the "Inquiry" part sound professional.

10

Declaring confident friendship: 'I think maybe we should perhaps try to be friends again'? Hint: You sound unsure because you used "think," "maybe," and "perhaps" all at once. Be confident!

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Answer: B. It removes unnecessary words ("person who is") for a cleaner statement.

Answer: A. It eliminates the redundancy of repeating the location.

Answer: D. "Disappointed" is more precise and mature than "mad."

Answer: D. "Wonderful" is grammatically correct and sounds more sincere.

Answer: C. It uses formal language ("clarify," "status") instead of a blunt demand.

Answer: C. "Mistakes" is a specific noun, whereas "stuff" means nothing.

Answer: A. Using "opportunity" shows more respect for the other person's choice.

Answer: B. It uses a semicolon and better transitions ("though," "remains") to connect ideas.

Answer: B. "Inquiring" and "lack of communication" are perfect formal letter terms.

Answer: C. Deleting "filler words" makes the writer sound sure of themselves.

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